Travel is the best teacher for me.First翻譯社 travel can learn about a contry´s culture.For example, Middle East people don´t eat pig and Westness eat sweet petato.The second, travel can realize yourself and less pressureThe last one, travel can make friend with foriend.When you come home foriend friend will talk you what things happened and we don´t know in oversea first time.
In my virgin tain.This is the summer vecation in the Japen翻譯社 Japen are very confrotable翻譯社 In the every where, You are improstable to find any grabeby.
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What tain make me the benefit?It is let me learn more and more folklore, and look the different view in this butiful word.
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When you saw the romantic EiffelTower in the movies, or watched the Great Wall of China on TV, have you ever imagined that you could admire such specific constructions on the sense some day? The advantages of traveling is a lot. First, traveling can make us open our eyes, we can see the senery not through the media翻譯社 but by ourselves. How wonderful that you can appreciate breathtaking senses just in front of them! Second, with the advanced education翻譯社 we have known a wide variety of knowledges about many countries. Such as history, climate and even customs, but if we never been the places翻譯社 it is no use to get so many informations.
One evening, a wedding party was held in a beautiful, nice and high-class resturant . A homeless named Paul walked by and was curious to what was happening inside. He was starving翻譯社 and was looking for a place to take a rest. The music was turned on so loud, and the food were smelling so good. Paul walked in without thinking.
Have some land is we study is our book.However, somewhere is we can go to travel.We can knew differen culture, people, and life.For example, we go to travel in Japan.We can meets people become friends and chat have something is we not.
A police car came by and saw him. Paul thought it was a taxi and trying to stop it. The car stopped and Paul past out very soon on the car. Ten minutes later翻譯社 Paul woke up with a started. He was in the police station.
Last summer, I went to Malaysia with a foundation, I used to consider it to be a poor country, but I was totally shocked at how prosperous it is! So many tall buildings and well-organized communities were right before my eyes! We also had some interaction with the local students. I found their learning attitude very active, which was very different from that of the Taiwanese students.
The next morning, the man finally awoke翻譯社 finding himself sitting in the police office. He was shocked. When the police told him the whole thing, he felt so embarrassed.
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Travel can see a lot of country and study different educated.Some country have historic site, some country have the religion, and some country have the technology etc.
"What the hell do you thing you´re doing here?!" the man cried out. He quickly threw Paul out and trying to fix the mass Paul made.
About 30 minutes later翻譯社 Kris was allowed to leave. He was ashamed for his "trip to the police office." He appologized to the police officer for his irrational behavior, and promised that he wouldn´t do it again.
He didn´t know himself act so funny, and wave his hand for police car.The policeman took him to police office.
One evening, I went to one of my friends´ weeding in my black suit. I was happy that he married a nice girl. And I was so excited that I drank too much. On my way home, my head was dazzling and my feet were heavy that I couldn´t walk well. So I gave up walking home, waving my hand to stop a taxi. Though I thought that taxi was strange with the sparking light翻譯社 I still got into the car and told the driver my address. Then I fell into a deep dream in the taxi. The next morning I woke up, I felt uncomfortable and tried to move my limbs to make myself awake. When I stood up翻譯社 I found that I was in the police station instead of my bedroom. What happened last night? A policeman pointed at the police car outside and told me "That was the "taxi" you took last night, do you have any problem now?"
I very like to travel.I´m hope I can go to travel every country.
One evening翻譯社 a man went to a party.He drinked much CH3COOH and that he felt asleep.When the party was end he want to went home.He took taxi and sleep on the car.What can the driver do?When the man opened his eyes, he saw aand his family.
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申明:主題清晰、具體,內容厚實;重點分明、組織完整且聯貫。詞句構造變化豐富,幾無文法毛病(稍有時態紛歧致的毛病,例第二對的第一句Last summer...foundation後的逗號應為句號翻譯);用字得宜(但第一段第三句中的broaden my mind應為broaden my horizons)翻譯
I´ve been to many countries before, and I enjoy my trip very much every time. To me翻譯社 travel is the best teacher. By traveling翻譯社 I can always broaden my mind and open my eyes to the things about which I had no idea before; I could also see the things which appeared only in the textbook before and that´s no doubt a wonderful experience.
When he opened his eyes again, he found himself in the police station. To his dismay翻譯社 he didn´t remember what he had done yesterday. A policeman came up to him and scolded him angrily. He was too embarrassed to look up at him. He really learned a lesson from the impressing mistake.
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One evening, my brother dressed himself up in order to attend his friend´s weding. When he arrived at the resturant, he came across a classmate who hadn´t connected with him since he graduated from college. My brother was so happy that he drank a large amount of wine.
As a result翻譯社 the man wake up look the policeman, the policeman very angry said, "Were are you".Do you know?Then man said翻譯社 I don´t know." "Why I am here?"
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Paul was already drunk. He didn´t know what was he doing翻譯社 and even where he was.
提醒:請以"Travel Is The Best Teacher"為主題,寫一篇最少120個字的英文作文。第一段針對文章主題,申明旅行的長處,並在第二段舉本身在國內或國外的觀光經驗,以印證第一段的申明翻譯
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It was a place full of happiness, grace and the most important thing, food. Paul couldn´t stop himself from putting the food in his mouth though his mouth was already full of food. While he was eating翻譯社 he saw a bottle of wine.
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We have many travel expiences in our life翻譯社 like graduate travel, camp on the mountain, visit museams….etc.Every travel have little or much knowledge in it.Even you think that you just play in traveling翻譯社 in fact翻譯社 you learn more about life which you can´t learn in common life.
Kris couldn´t remember anything that had happened during the drive to the police office.He was waken up by a thunderous sound, "What are you doing? Do you know where it is?" said the police officer. Kris was shocked to death but had no reason for explaination.
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If I hadn´t been to Malaysia, I wouldn´t have gained so many insights in these things. To me翻譯社 travel is truly the best teacher.
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Travel is the best teacher, there are three reasons why I consider it. First翻譯社 we can see anything what we have never seen by traveling around the world. Second, we can realize how different the culture is between us. Last but not least, we can learn a lot of knowledge by ourselies which it have never appeared from the book.
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After the weding翻譯社 My brother walked along the street and he wanted to take a taxi. Because my brother war drunk, no driver wanted to let him get on the car. Finally, my brother glazed at a car so he raised his hand and got on it. He fell asleep as soon as he sat. When he wake up, he found he was in police station. How terrible he is!
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These kind of story have happened very often in these day. People who don´t work or have no work are all marking around on the street. This really caused a great society problem. These things should be avoid in our life because we have a group of police who should be working for the people. Having these kind of questions can dissepear soon.
One evening, he go to a dinner and eat very much翻譯社 drink very much.So he has a little醉.When the dime in the end, he will go home by heself.He was walking on the road, and he went to took a taxi.But翻譯社 he was disunderstanding, he took a police car.And then, the police take he to police局.Next day, at 8:00am, he is disunderstanding, why he will in there?The police is talk him, he was have 喝醉 yesterday.So he is very red-face翻譯社 and then he just real go home.
I remember that one time I took a trip to mainland china with my family. We paid a visit to WestLake. The scenery I saw really breathtaking. I liked the lake when I was a child. But I didn´t know how big it was! I was so excited that I ran aroud the lake. The astonishing view was not a book could give me. Suddenly翻譯社 I saw a person throw a gabage to the lake. How could he do that! It actually broke the impression I used have on the Chinese people. Maybe it was a lesson for me.